hmmm, its been a long time since i updated.  uhh, for those who went to the concert or were in it, was it me or did it actually not sound too bad?

if you could do me a big favour, id appreciate it.  I thought up a song last nite and today i recorded it.  Its very unrefined, i dont have good recording equipment, and i had almost no time to practice it.  before i revise and add/remove parts, could you tell me what i should change to it to make the song sound better?  id appreciate it.  by the way, its full of errors and messups, i just put it together in my head the night before.  http://www.purevolume.com/apfabris.  the songs called "Vida", the only one there